"Who are you?” It seems like an easy question to answer:
Shannon FitzGerald. However, there are
so many components that make up each person that the question leads to varying
responses. Most of us will say that we
are juniors at Milton High School or that we are athletes or dancers or
musicians, but these categories aren’t the only things that define us. Most
of us have talents that we don’t even know about, and dreams that maybe no one
knows about us.
I would describe myself as very ambitious but not necessarily
certain what for. My friends and my
sisters know exactly what they want to have a career in: medicine, education,
federal justice. The fact that they all
know what they want to do with their lives and I still have no idea is
incredibly stressful, but it isn’t like I haven’t thought about it. I’m always thinking about a career that would
be something I’m good at and that would pay well. I’m pretty good at math but going into
finance or accounting sounds disgusting, so that is where I usually get
stuck. I feel that I am capable of doing
anything I want if I put my mind to it; it would just be much easier if I knew
what it was that I wanted.
My current life consists of playing field hockey and softball,
which can be both fun and miserable.
Sports are not my favorite thing to do, but I do love to watch sports
such as baseball and football. Besides
watching sports, I also watch way too much T.V. and have a high appreciation
for movies. Maybe someday I would like
to work in the entertainment industry, but who knows. Right now I am just trying to focus on school
and sports, which together leaves little time for anything else.
Shannon, this is an interesting post. The first paragraph is nice. I was looking forward to an introduction to yourself that did not include the cliche references to sports, family, friends, and academics. Your second paragraph was also interesting in that you explored yourself in relation to those family and friends whom you are close to. Ultimately, though, you just end with the same type of - slightly boring - response that you rejected in your first paragraph. This struck me as odd. You were on to something cool, but you lost it. Regardless, this is pretty well written.
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