The bell rings and within half a
minute, every seat is empty. Little Anne Marie rushes home after school to grab
a snack and then retreat to the backyard with her sister for hours to play badminton. The outgoing redhead next door joins in when she gets home from
middle school. But now the game is two against one, so Anne Marie’s dad drops
his briefcase after work to level the playing field. After everyone’s energy is
spent and the sun begins to fade, the little girls go home to complete the
night’s homework assignments.
When I was young I procrastinated
as much as any other little child, but I still had time to be active and
social, and my parents would always sit me down eventually and get me through
my homework. This was possible because technology was not so advanced and
overwhelming as to present a distraction. Contrary to the children of the early
2000s, today’s primary-school children are engulfed by numerous computers of
all sizes and purposes. Smart phones, tablets, laptops, desktops, iPods,
infinite television—one might think technology has taken control of the world.
Which is not a favorable setting for the development of young minds.
With the combination of increased
and more advanced electronics, children are becoming less social, less active,
and less driven to spend time on academics. Studies performed by the Kaiser
Family Foundation reveal that on average, children spend “75
hours [on] media every week. And that doesn't even include the hour and a half
spent text messaging each day, and the half hour kids talk on the cell phone.”
The studies also report that the heaviest media-users consistently got below
C’s on their report cards, and many children are sleep-deprived because of the procrastination. Since many parents do not set strict limits on
television or computer time, these wondrously helpful devices can serve as
major distractions and even health risks.
Though it’s difficult to believe,
members of my age group are now in a position to recount differences in their
childhoods from today’s with a granny-like “When I was a kid…” It is true that the
effects of technology on teenagers could be almost as detrimental, but they are
already matured and mentally developed enough to handle the distractions
responsibly. …Right?
Bibliography:
“Study Shows Kids Tethered to Technology.” ABC News. ABC News
Network, 20 Jan. 2010. Web. 02 Nov. 2014.
Thanks Anne Marie. This is a nice post. You make some nice rhetorical decisions in this post. First, you hook the reader with a simple, yet engaging personal anecdote. You substantiate your claims about technology by citing empirical evidence, and lastly, you write technically well. I believe you. I don't have much to offer in terms of criticism. This is a strong post. I can relate to much of this. When I was younger, I would play basketball every day after school for 2-3 hours - right through the winter. No television, video games, or computers for me.
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