Ocean State Job Lot is (not) the best place to
get last minute Christmas presents. They have everything, and it is all so cheap. Shuffling
down the aisles, I wondered to myself why that is so.
As my curiosity heightened, I began
to actually examine the objects for sale. I picked up an art set that cost
three dollars. I turned it over, searching for some indication as to why it was
so inexpensive. I couldn't find anything suspicious, so I made my way over to
the sunglasses rack. The glasses cost a dollar for the same pair that had cost
fifteen dollars at the mall. I picked up a few more items and after a few more
investigations, I noticed a common factor. Everything was made in China. I
still could not understand why that mattered, so I telephoned my good friend
google for help.
This is what I discovered: America
needs to stop importing Chinese goods as soon as possible.
Imported Chinese goods have too much
control over our economy. The amount of goods exported to America from China
are significantly higher than the goods exported from America to China. This is
called a trade deficit, and it exists despite the fact that U.S. exports to China
are at all-time high, $121.7 billion. Imports from China in 2014 were
calculated to being $440.5 billion. What economists are noticing is that the
deficit keeps growing. Chinese manufacturers are exporting four times the
amount of goods that we are importing to them. This is a negative thing because
we have drastically become a non-self-sufficient nation.
However, a majority of Chinese imports
into America are from U.S.-based companies that send raw materials to China for
cheap assembly. This would mean the deficit is benefiting American businesses.
Something still does not seem right.
Why are American manufacturers in China? Should they not be in America? The
U.S. based companies choose to produce from China because Chinese labor roughly
costs about one seventh of American labor. It is abject that companies have
taken advantage of this opportunity, because it leads to the eradication of tens of thousands of American jobs every year. According to the New York Times, 12.3% of
American workers in the manufacturing industry are currently displaced because of job outsourcing
to China. The loss of jobs rips a huge
hole in our economy. Not only that, but these large companies with cheap goods are outsourcing other small American businesses. Essentially this is creating a monopoly. These companies have set lower price standards, making it nearly impossible for small businesses to compete.
This system also negatively
affects the lives of the poor workers in China. With their loose labor
regulations and high population, the people do not have a choice but to take
these low wage jobs. On average, they make $9,800 per year for a full time, 9
hour work day, factory job. Any American who buys something with a “made in
china” label tacked onto it is supporting this bestial treatment.
America needs to be more self-reliant,
and halt all trade with China. We need to stop promoting the importation of Chinese
goods, because they harm the US economy and negatively affect the lives of Chinese
workers.
Maeve, overall I think that your point is clear, if we keep receiving Chinese imports, America as a country is supporting negative working conditions in China and they harm our economy. I also thought that the way you brought up this argument with your experiences at Ocean State Job Lot is unique and personal to you. Then you find the similarity between all the items you find and a light bulb goes off. So there's a good start. You also give the reader some stats about the U.S economy and our relations with China, so you have credibility. The most interesting stat i thought was the one about how Chinese factory workers only make about 9,800 dollars a year. That is really eye opening and makes your argument stronger. I laughed when you wrote that you turned to your friend Google for the answers.
ReplyDeleteI think that the paragraphs you write are too short, which isn't a bad thing but if you write short paragraphs make sure the idea you present is developed enough before moving onto a new one. I also feel like the last sentence/paragraph is just tacked on, it doesn't help you. Also you use the words something and everything a little too much so it' makes the sentence kind of vague.
Maeve, this is good. This is definitely an issue. It has been an issue throughout my life, and it will continue to be an issue. While you acknowledged that it is cheaper for companies to produce goods in China, you didn't connect this to the revenue that these companies generate. By producing goods in China, and selling them in America, they are able to generate HUGE revenue. It's a brilliant formula in our open market economy. I think your solution is a bit simple. We will never stop importing goods from China. A better solution would be to promote buying products "Made in America." I am not an economist, but my gut tells me that the best thing an American can do to promote the American economy is to purchase goods made here. I know I personally get discouraged any time I buy something "Made in China."
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