Maeve Doyle
To be completely
honest, I do not know who I am. The truth is that I am just a being that can
change who I am in an instant. I don’t like to answer the question, “Who are
you,” because I’m not really a definite person. I don’t know who I am right
now, but in general terms of answering the prompt, I can share what I like to
do and what I have done.
I can be outgoing, but I can also be somewhat
of an introvert. I often enjoy my own company more than being surrounded by people.
I love reading and poetry, but that might just be a side effect of my preference to be alone.
Despite that, I have been commonly told I have a type-A personality. I argue a lot. My
sister told me to join debate team so I could put my arguing to use, so I did.
I have come along way since when I first joined the team. I think I am prepared
for the “everything is an argument” idea in this class, thanks to the way
debate has made me think.
I believe myself to be a hard worker. I tend to look at
everything in life as a marathon, despite the fact that I am not much of a
runner. I try to pace myself and push myself. I know that if I actually want
something, I will get it. If I do not put in the effort, deep down I do not
really care.
I spend lots of
nights at my grandmother’s house so she doesn’t get lonely. I work from three to eight pm
after school a few days a week. An adjective I would use to describe myself
would be ‘caring’ because I care for a lot of people in my life.
Maeve, I look forward to working with you this year in a different context. I know this was a response that required you to think about yourself. However, that does not mean that your response had to be so focused on the "I". I think every sentence you write starts in some manner with the pronoun "I". This is stylistically tough to read. Readers like variation and creativity. In this post, you show neither. Be careful about that. Also, you should probably try to write a bit more. You really wrote the minimum here.
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